Phrasing Compound Subjects/Verbs

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I’d appreciate some help on how to phrase verses with compound subjects and verbs: 2 Corinthians 9:10 for example. This is how I did it, but I’m not sure it is right.

Sorry my reply is so late, Chris! I didn’t see this post until now.

Here I’d indent “supply and multiply your seed” further within its line, and then make “and increase the harvest” coordinate with it. That will make it more obvious that both verbs have “he” as their subject.

You could also divide 10a after “supply,” to show that there are actually two verbs there. I’d do that in my phrase, so that you could see the three parallel verbs.

Then the arrow of “for sowing” would go up to the indented phrase “and multiply your seed.”

You did well to extract “who supplies…” from between the subject and verb of 10a.

Let me know if any of that doesn’t make sense!