Phrasing phrasing...

Koko

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Is this acurate?

Brent Karding

Thanks for uploading an image of your phrase! You did very well at the First Pass; there is only one small place it could be improved: “Of death” (14c) should be divided, just like you did with “of the shadow.”

Otherwise, superb work!

Next time, btw, you can upload another phrase to the Passage Discussions section of the forum. I’ll be glad to critique again!